First three chapters, revised (well, kind of)

Once more I have been slacking in the writing department. I figured, as a means of inspiration, I'd post the (almost) most recent version of Cara's work-in-progress. I went back the other day and fleshed a little bit of chapter 1 out and still have to work through chaps 2-4. This version doesn't have the flesh-out, but it's different than the previous postings.

So, if this is your first time joining us and you're interested in meeting Cara and crew, take a look at this version, rather than the previous two ;)

HERE IT IS!

A new poem

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The pounding of my heart

Echoing in my mind

The thrill of moments

Full of starlight

Hopeful hours and beams of promise

The warmth of what's to come

Sweeping through my soul.

A tiny crack slinking through my resolve

Climbing the crumbling walls of fear

Primed with empty sunrises

Oceans of tumult and vanishing shadows

The melting sinews of what could have been

Freezing in my memory.